Meadow Glen has been rocked by a crime spree. The past three nights, houses have been broken into and items of value have gone missing. Only the wealthiest families have been targeted. The town is on edge and the police are baffled. Mayor Lewis Alterman is out for blood after the burgler made off with his mother's jewels, but the thief is canny. None of the stolen goods have shown up at the local consignment store or other fences.
Lupe put down her newspaper and shook
her head. She gave her tea a stir and looked around the cafe. Who of
her neighbors would do such a thing? She looked at Robin as she
angrily tapped at the computer. She observed Gil as he pulled his hat
down over his eyes and leaned back in his chair; his wife Penny was
leaning forward, earnestly reading her book. The bell tinged as the
door opened, admitting someone Lupe hadn't seen much of before. She
thought his name was Shane and all she knew of him is that he worked
in the factory downtown and had a young daughter named Jasmine.
Before she could school her face into a neutral expression, he looked
over at her and caught her eye. He held her gaze for a moment before
heading up to the counter and ordering a croissant and an americano.
Lupe went back to her newspaper, but
was interupted in the middle of Miss Manners, “Would it be ok if I
joined you?” She was confused, the cafe wasn't crowded, but here he
was. It would be churlish to turn him away, plus she admired his
guts, “Be my guest.” He sat down across the table from her and
broke off a piece of his pastry. He read the front page of her
newspaper as she returned to the advice column, “That's some caper,
huh?”
“The thief?”
“Yeah,” he took a sip of his
americano, grimacing as he burned his tongue.
“I think it's awful,” Lupe said,
“People should feel safe in their homes. He's ruining that for
them.”
“Maybe they feel a little too safe.
It says here they didn't even have their doors locked.”
“What did you say your name was
again?”
“Shane, Shane Granger, nice to meet
you...” he said holding out his hand.
“Lupe Estes” she replied shaking
his hand.
“I gotta get going, but we should get
together sometime. I enjoyed our chat.” With that he got up and
left, and taking the color out of the cafe with him. When she picked
up her newspaper to go, she found his name and number scrawled on the
top corner. What a smooth operator! She hadn't even noticed him doing
that. She shook her head, intending to toss it in the recycling bin
on her way out, but didn't.
She hopped on her bike and checked her
watch, she had a half-hour to make it home before Juniper did.
Juniper was no trouble at all, but she didn't really like to be
alone. Lupe couldn't really blame her on that one. People react to
their past in different ways. Lupe's parents left her and her brother
alone while they worked and Lupe became fascinated by the world
around her. When the fridge was empty, she would go to the neighbors
around dinner time looking pitiful. She knew her parents were trying,
but she never really felt their love the way her brother did.
Juniper's mom... the less said about her the better.
When concerned neighbors called DCFS
about her leaving her daughter alone in the house for hours, she
would take her to the park and leave her there instead. She was
comfortable in the belief that everyone there would assume she was
there with someone else and she'd pick her up after the end of her
shift.
The first afternoon Juniper played
happily with the other children, but began to get nervous as one by
one her playmates left for dinner. She sat on a bench and clutched
her knees to her chest and waited. Eventually, her mom came back and
got her. When they got home, she gave her a poptart and sent her to
bed. Her mom sat on the couch, “soda can” in hand and fell
asleep. In the morning, Juniper got a lecture before the bus came
about keeping to herself and this was family business- no one needed
to know.
Her mother failed to anticipate that
people would eventually notice that Juniper didn't go home when the
other children did. People would notice the little girl that didn't
play with the others, but sat on the benches watching the parents
with hungry eyes. Maybe it was the grandmotherly woman who walked her
little white dog through the park every evening at seven that called.
Or maybe it was the nanny who took the last child home. Or maybe it
was the harried mother with the two little boys. Or maybe it was all
three who called DCFS and called and called again.
Juniper didn't like being home alone.
Juniper didn't like being outside for too long. She wouldn't get into
trouble, but she wouldn't be happy either. She would do her homework
with Floyd laying on her feet and look reproachfully at Lupe once she
got in. Lupe peddled faster.
After she got Juniper to bed, Lupe got
the newspaper out of her bag and looked at the number. Should she
call him? He had challenged her, he was confident, those shoulders...
She called her friend Leah instead. Leah had moved to Meadow Glen at
about the same time Lupe had to pursue art surrounded by nature. Then
on one of her long walks along the dunes she'd met Elliot, a man who
looked like he walked straight off the cover of a romance novel, and
fell head over heels in love. Luckily, he reciprocated and they'd
been inseparable ever since, even though others had tried to catch
his eye.
“Hey, Lupe, what's up? Elijah, I
thought you said that project wasn't due until Thursday! Well, talk
to your dad.” Lupe laughed, Leah's conversations were always
sprinkled with directions to her sons or interjections from them.
“I met Shane Granger today, do you
know him?”
“I think Elijah has had a few classes
with Jas. I've seen him at parent teacher nights, but he keeps pretty
quiet. Why?”
“We had an interesting conversation,
is all. Then when he left, he had left his number.”
“I guess he liked what you had to
say! You should call him! Sam Lane shouldn't turn you off men for
life, Lupe. Don't tell Elliot, but have you seen his eyes?”
“What's this, I hear!? My wife has
noticed another man's eyes!? Oh woe! Oh sorrow! How shall I live this
day down!” Lupe heard Elliot exclaim in the background, followed by
a thunk which was probably Leah hitting him playfully with the phone.
They soon hung up the phone. Lupe checked Tinder. She swiped left and
right a few times before she saw his picture. His hair was messy and
he was smiling at the camera holding a pool cue. She scrolled down
looking at other pictures and reading what he had to say about
himself. The picture of him on the beach laughing into the camera was
interesting. Yes, interesting, she settled on texting him.
After a few days of texting, she agreed
to meet him at the festival. Lupe felt about sixteen as they played
the carnival games and rode the rides. When Shane grabbed her hand,
electricity shot through her body. She looked up at him and noticed
him looking at their hands intently, she felt herself blushing as
she met his eyes. His hand was warm and firm, calloused, capable, and
intensely male. He took her other hand and looked at her palms.
Lupe's hands looked small, slim, and brown in his. Shane looked like
he was having similar thoughts. Instead he said, “Do you like
rollerskating? I've taken Jas a few times and I'd like to think I've
gotten pretty good.”
“Pretty good” was a bit of an
understatement thought Lupe as she began to lose her balance and he
arced around to take her hands and steady her while skating
backwards. “Here, relax. Keep your feet still and bend your knees a
little bit.” He pulled her along like a child. “You seem a bit
more steady now, try to push off with your back foot and glide. I'll
be here holding your hand. I won't let you fall.” Lupe soon got
into the rhythm Shane set of push, glide, push, glide. She could've
let go of his hand, but she didn't. When they got off the rink, Shane
grinned at her, “You're a natural!”
Lupe looked down at her feet, “You're
just saying that to encourage me. There's no way you got that good
'just taking Jas a few times'” she looked up at him pointedly.
He laughed ruefully, “You're right, I
used to play hockey as a kid. When I got to high school, they had an
ice hockey team. I started as a defenseman, but when I got to varsity
Coach moved me to center. Skating's skating even if you've got six
wheels instead of a blade.”
Lupe checked the time, she had told Juniper she'd be back by four-- it was 3:45. "Oh no! I Told Juniper I'd be home in 15 minutes!" she exclaimed. "I gotta go, but let's do this again sometime, ok?" Shane gave her a look that told her he was thinking of kissing her, "Definitely"
Reluctantly, she hopped on her bike. She wasn't some young thing anymore, she shouldn't feel so fluttery just because a man paid a little attention to her! Even if he was a handsome one, with muscular shoulders and warm brown eyes.
Note: I'm trying to get my blog closer to where my game is, but some of the things that have happened there make more sense in terms of play than in terms of the characters I've established. Coincidentally, the loudspeaker was playing "Teenage Dream" while they were at the festival. It's hard for me to advance the generation while trying to figure out how to write about it.
I think you're doing a great job so far! The story has all come together very cohesively. I think we can all forgive a little discontinuity for gameplay/challenge reasons, just like we can forgive bending of the rules for story reasons.
ReplyDeleteI loved the little taste of backstory, too. This was a great story chapter.
Thank you! I think I can chalk everything up to impetuousness and just shrug. Shit happens in real life that you wouldn't expect and it's not as weird as in the Sims, but people act out of character all the time.
DeleteI don't know about Shane yet, But I definitely like Elliott. :)
ReplyDeleteI love him! I was seriously pissed when Story Progression hooked him and Leah up before I could even have Lupe meet him. But now that their sons are aging up to teen, I can't be too upset.
DeleteI second Realm of Rohan--the fact that it's Sims is what makes these blogs so fun to read, so I never have a problem when the game bleeds into the story. Of course, do whatever makes you most content with your writing and play style. :)
ReplyDeleteJuniper's backstory was so sad! Just the thought of only giving a child a single poptart for dinner makes my skin crawl. I'm glad she's with Lupe now, and I hope there aren't any problems in the future with her mom.
I like Shane so far, but I'm not sure I /trust/ him yet...
Juniper's story is about as sad as I could bear to make it. One of the things I like about the Sims is that things are so light.
DeleteShane is a very likable man with a lot of secrets. Unlike Sam who has entirely too few secrets and all of them making him less likable.